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When?

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This pain I feel is all too real.

It rends my heart like tempered steel.

But dare I hope one day to heal?

An answer some day may reveal.
Two weeks ago, I had another bout of melancholy. I don't want to go into details but the result was this little rhyme. Except for the last line, which was added today.

I really don't know what to make of this. It just doesn't feel like anything special. At least it rhymes :shrug:
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ShimmeringDewdrops's avatar
This flows well. Nicely written! :)